What’s Going On

WOW, although I am still an Aspiring Screenwriter waiting for my big break, I like to think I have grown as a writer.  Here, I thought I was about seventy-five to eighty percent finished with my second screenplay “Torn”, after re-reading it for the first time in over a year, I realized WTH.  I am about forty-five to fifty percent finished.  I still feel it is a great story with a great plot and premise, but dayum is it awful.  It needs a major re-write, and I am excited to do so.

I also have a third “The Proposal” (title still up in the air), I have been outlining for a couple of months… another good one I might add, but of course, I would think so.  I do believe I will save “The Proposal” and get some help from another Aspiring writer once I make it because I plan to make it.  Plenty of Aspiring writers waiting to be discovered just like I am, they just need a break, and I plan to make that happen.

Any who, I have entered several screenplay competitions for 2013, and my fingers are crossed.  All I need is that one big break or even a small break would suffice.  I ask myself, what I would do if I make it, and I have answered that question in the above paragraph, pay it forward… help someone else to succeed.  Something I feel we do not have enough of is positive “black films”.  We have hundreds of undiscovered writers, including myself who is aching to tell their story, and my word is my bond, I promise I will help another undiscovered writer once I make it.

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My Next Move

As I type here today on my brand new website with barely any traffic, except for a few spammers who somehow managed to find me…. I am a little frustrated and disappointed.  I entered my screenplay into a third competition (Atlanta Film Festival Screenplay Competition) and I did not place.  Out of two- hundred and twenty five (225) screenplays, I did not place.  Mid 2012, I entered the Scriptapalooza and the Nicholl Fellowship Screenplay Competitions, and I was confident.  I did advance to the Quarterfinals with Scriptapalooza, but nothing with Nicholl.
I paid for an analysis along with my entry into the Scriptapalooza, and received promising feedback.  The reader advised me that I was almost there, I just had a few discrepancies and my slug-lines where a little confusing and a few remarks that I did not agree with, but I digress.  The reader advised me, and I quote: “There are some typos and incorrect wording throughout the script. This can be remedied with a quick polish.
In the end, “Sometimes Love” is a deeply felt story that is just about there. With a little more work, this could truly be an impressive calling card.
Good work.”  End quote!
This gave me the confidence I needed, and I had my fingers crossed that I would at least place in the ATLFF Screenplay Competition, but I stand corrected.  I know it’s mean of me to say, but the sixteen who did place, I read their log-lines and I say WTF, my screenplay is better than those;  I wouldn’t be human if I didn’t think that.
Again, I am not going to throw my hands up and say “the hell with it”, I will continue to move forward because I believe it will land in the right hands soon.  I plan to join the Organization of Black Screenwriters (OBS) very soon, and maybe I can make this thing happen for me.

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My New Website

Hello world and welcome to my wonderful website. I’m just getting started so bare with me. I’ve finished my first screenplay “Sometimes Love”, and I’m about to finish working on my second “Torn”. As of now, I still don’t have an Agent, and honestly…. I haven’t been searching for one, but would like one. Currently, I’m just entering my first screenplay into screenplay competitions, and I’m keeping my fingers crossed. Anyways, again… welcome to my site and take a tour, leave a comment and or suggestion, and say hello!

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